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New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 11:25 am
by Glenn
Scooby doo
Scooby
Scooby
Scoo-by

Scooby so fine
Scooby doo
Drinking Charles Shaw wine

Scooby do
Scooby do
Scooby
scooby
Scoo-by

Scooby Snacks
Scooby do
So many fat on their backs

Scooby do
Scooby do
Scooby
scooby
Scoo-by

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repeat fade out
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Pretty cool huh?

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 12:01 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
yea that could be a hit....If ya dont get sued
by hanna-barbera....

charles shaw?....that's that discount stuff
at trader joes....huh?....it aint bad...though
I dont really like wine

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 4:38 pm
by Glenn
Yip, They call it 2 Buck Chuck.

I think it's Trader Joes price leader.


Dammit. I forgot to add "do whop's" on the song.

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 6:27 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
yep it is....but I like all the things they try to
put chocolate on....chocolate this and chocolate
that....

ya know ya gotta put a lot o sugar in all the chocolate?
dont like that though


...do waps?

na!...lets do some lyrics man


I give you a line and you give me one
till we gotta song

)hey that rhymes!)

"the marshal came today"
(er something...)
(dont tell me you dont colaberate)
(just give us a next line)

lets write a song Glenners!!!!!!!

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 6:35 pm
by Glenn
the marshal came today
To the Civic Center court

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 6:54 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
the marshal came today
To the Civic Center court
to say he I left before the green.

(cameras at the lights ...huh..traffic cams?)




mmm it's got a flow allready

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:28 pm
by Glenn
Am I reading it right?

the marshal came today
To the Civic Center court
to say "He (I?) left before the green...
took a great big gulp of aged Jim Beam...

If i fucked that up fpr you sorry. He? I? thing.

(cameras at the lights ...huh..traffic cams?)

Ha Yes, you remember but also more recently I got a ticket ($345)for throughing a cigerette but out the window & 8 hours of community service of cleaning the toilets at Doheney State Beach. (the worst part)






mmm it's got a flow allready

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:35 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
no no no fucked it up?

it's gotta flow!

...but I'm drunk....I gotta see some guests off...

let's leave this for tomorrow....

I'll get a line in at breakfast tomorrow...

this is fun Glenners


oh yea...community service...yer lucky ya only had 8 hours


manyana

...and this pc in the garage keeps crashing....fucking with the
art...I hate rebooting

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 10:34 am
by The Rizen shloemoe
Ug!


I'm hungover

need more time

to make more reason

to make more rhyme


...ok headache now

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:08 pm
by Glenn
You gotta finsh what you start! :twisted:

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:11 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
ok...here's some


the marshal came today
To the Civic Center court
draggin me in to be seen
saying I left before the green.


The judge looked down with stroblight eyes
looked at pictures with contemptable surmise
at pictures of my cousin
who looks a lot like me


..ok thats taking a weird turn huh?

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 4:16 pm
by Glenn
The Rizen shloemoe wrote:ok...here's some


the marshal came today
To the Civic Center court
draggin me in to be seen
saying I left before the green.


The judge looked down with stroblight eyes
looked at pictures with contemptable surmise
at pictures of my cousin
who looks a lot like me


..ok thats taking a weird turn huh?
He said
"We been tailing you from National City to this Santa Ana light,
I recommend you plead the 5th and don't put up a fight.
Pay the register your penalty or enter a quick guilty plea,
You've the same excuses every time,
Just don't say that '"that's my cousin"" or I'll double up your fine."

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 4:23 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
Glenn wrote:
The Rizen shloemoe wrote:ok...here's some


the marshal came today
To the Civic Center court
draggin me in to be seen
saying I left before the green.


The judge looked down with stroblight eyes
looked at pictures with contemptable surmise
at pictures of my cousin
who looks a lot like me


..ok thats taking a weird turn huh?
He said
"We been tailing you from National City to this Santa Ana light,
I recommend you plead the 5th and don't put up a fight.
Pay the register your penalty or enter a quick guilty plea,
You've the same excuses every time,
Just don't say that '"that's my cousin"" or I'll double up your fine."

what if it really was his cousin
how unfair is a system that
relies on cameras with strobelike eyes?
punish an innocent man?

huh?

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:02 pm
by Glenn
What if it was your cousin who was smuggling a consignment of Cocaine from Columbia and got a camera stroblight ticket. Maybe it saved his ass from jail? :o

Always the devils advocate.

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:15 pm
by The Rizen shloemoe
Glenn wrote:What if it was your cousin who was smuggling a consignment of Cocaine from Columbia and got a camera stroblight ticket. Maybe it saved his ass from jail? :o

Always the devils advocate.
you mean the cop took a bribe?

that's terrible!!!!!!

ya know adding this detail makes it more of a ballad


that'll get our asses kicked dude!!!!

:D

Re: New song I'm working on - Scooby so fine

Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 8:15 pm
by Glenn
Yip, back to the Civic Center today. This time to the federal building to get a visa for my passport.